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05:26:41 P'Sky

Amy
You sound like my mum xD
Maybe I'm too dramatic?
I did have a good time, I taught him some card games.
I'll definitely talk to him later

05:25:42 Amy/Anpmygdala

Exist
I hope they can give you sone amazing pups soon XD

ZefhyrMaracaibo

05:25:36

existencw! those wing thingies are ancient-cool. love the background!

05:24:58 Exist / Kuskyn

Amy, I can't wait for spring now ^^
-WP Click-
Vessel and Deity will make gorgeous pups hopefully~

Zefhyr He's between Veskol and Vukasin xD

ZefhyrMaracaibo

05:24:35

p'sky was he "bornded" under a rock

05:24:11 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
Did you atleast have fun?
Just let him know you can meet up again but only as friends so he does not expect anything
Only if you want to ofcourse

05:22:17 P'Sky

Amy
He was sweet but kept being up religion too much >>.
He said the women in his culture tend to stay home but if they want to work it's fine. I told him I'm grown and no one is taking care of me.
We didn't have anything in common and now he's asking when can we see each other again, maybe as friends but whatever feelings he has, needs to go

ZefhyrMaracaibo

05:21:57

i will go take a look see

05:21:32 Amy/Anpmygdala

Exist
Wow she looks amazing

05:21:22 Exist / Kuskyn

Zefhyr She matches her to be mate Vessel ^^

ZefhyrMaracaibo

05:20:22

@exist: looks very nice

05:19:13 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
Ooo what happens XD
I have a cligged nose and i need to get ready to work ;-;
Not the best lol

05:18:14 Exist / Kuskyn

-WP Click-
Finally finished her gear and decor ^^

05:17:16 P'Sky

Very interesting night >>

How are you?

05:15:18 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky!

05:13:22 P'Sky

Amy

04:52:46 Cat

It means alot, thank you <3

04:47:55 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cat
Definetly not terrible
You are amazing at this

04:46:44 Cat

*terrible

04:46:36 Cat

Oh thank you... I was like halfway through it thinking that I am Terrie at this sort of thing xD

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Isle of Gold - Comments

March 23, 2024 10:21 PM

Lightbringer

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Hello hello! To kinda keep the actual story unhindered, comments can go here! Thank you!

Story Link: https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=45&t=90323

Edited at March 23, 2024 11:27 PM by Zeraphia

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March 24, 2024 05:36 PM

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i only have read the first chapter so far but MY GOD?? the way you perfectly set the scene is so good, i could picture exactly where Varian was and how he was feeling D: so goood, i can't wait to impulse read all of it right now

Isle of Gold - Comments

March 24, 2024 05:37 PM

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OH Geez XD

well, I definitely welcome feedback! Help me get better in writing. :3

imma... go eat dinner. XD

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March 24, 2024 05:51 PM

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i'm not a writer myself, just an avid reader so feedback is not my forte xD it looks great to me though! i especially like how you seperate the speech from the other text so it's easier to read.

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March 24, 2024 08:33 PM

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I'm glad! I remember reading somewhere a long time ago that when someone new speaks, you put in a new paragraph. Since I've wanted to be an author I picked up the habit and haven't let it go since!

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