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Teen wolf rp anyone? Pm me, please be able to play female (Malia x Theo)
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Hollow: breeding
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Urox: yeah that makes perfect sense
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Juno
No worries! There are also raspberries in various colours that increase the chances of inheriting rarer pelts. I think golden has the highest increase - but at least one parent should have the rare, legendary etc pelt
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Juno
Green fern, red raspberry, black raspberry and golden raspberry, but I recommend to read the info about the items
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Juno
From breeding or wolf game?
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BUT the rarity can only be obtained from the parents. So don't breed a 15AC R with a 20AC R and expect a 80R pup
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Urox: thank you!
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Green ferns do it. They're 2 apples <3
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Night: do you know what they are?
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There are items at barter if I am right
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is there anything I can do to increase the chances of getting a rare wolf? or is it just luck
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Ender as well boo
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Void, Grapes or grape,

My brain cant think either sorry haha
 distant-screams
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time to give her a lil redesign <3

thanks guys
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katy

Mauve since they only have 1 art so far
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Mauve
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name ideas for this guy? I'm too tired to think of a name for him
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which one deserves more art first?
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Ash,
thanks xD i feel the same

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Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:06 AM


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Looking back on my critique I don't think that was helpful at all. >.<
For the top one, canine necks don't curl like a swan. That's what it looks like is happening there. Very nice eyes
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:17 AM


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Sir Froggington said:
Looking back on my critique I don't think that was helpful at all. >.<
For the top one, canine necks don't curl like a swan. That's what it looks like is happening there. Very nice eyes


No, it was very helpful! ^^
I was trying to make the head look like it was turning to face the viewer, so I'll have to work on that, aha! Thank you very much!! ^^
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:19 AM


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Oohh hmmm
My red line though was basically the same thing. I don't see how it was helpful

Edited at April 29, 2022 09:19 AM by Sir Froggington
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:22 AM


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Love your drawing, the wolf nose could be more rectangular and the head more round, besides that it is amazing!! <3
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:23 AM


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The head is turned to face the viewer. I think you just need to flatten out the back of the neck more. (Probably not the word to describe it) You also have the body colored so you can see where the chest is
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:23 AM


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Sir Froggington said:
Oohh hmmm
My red line though was basically the same thing. I don't see how it was helpful


Because I could see I needed to make the nose a bit longer and squarer. xD
Like, I could see what you were trying to say; I think if I made it have those proportions it would look a bit better. ^^
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:24 AM


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Hi ^^
Just a lil tip/fyi
Wolves have pointed snouts, and their nose kinda sticks up so make a smol lil bump on the top end of the muzzle :D
And for eyes, canines have a black scel. So I normally have black instead of white around the eye, and to make eyes seem to glow you'll need to use lighter colors that make it *pop*
For example
Brown eyes, use a dark brown for base and at the bottom use a slightly light brown and then use in a small brush, light/pale yellow to make light / shining affect ^^ if I remember later I'll make a smol redline for ya <3
Hope this somewhat helps, I'm horrid at explaining lol
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:25 AM


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Glitched Souls said:
Love your drawing, the wolf nose could be more rectangular and the head more round, besides that it is amazing!! <3


Thank you so much! I'll definitely have to try that! ^^

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The head is turned to face the viewer. I think you just need to flatten out the back of the neck more. (Probably not the word to describe it) You also have the body colored so you can see where the chest is


Oh, okay! I can see what you're saying. Thank you!! ^^

Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:28 AM


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Malina said:
Hi ^^
Just a lil tip/fyi
Wolves have pointed snouts, and their nose kinda sticks up so make a smol lil bump on the top end of the muzzle :D
And for eyes, canines have a black scel. So I normally have black instead of white around the eye, and to make eyes seem to glow you'll need to use lighter colors that make it *pop*
For example
Brown eyes, use a dark brown for base and at the bottom use a slightly light brown and then use in a small brush, light/pale yellow to make light / shining affect ^^ if I remember later I'll make a smol redline for ya <3
Hope this somewhat helps, I'm horrid at explaining lol


Ok, cool! Thank you so much!! ^^
Onyxs Art - Critiques welcome!April 29, 2022 09:31 AM


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Hope this helps :)
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Edit: oh darn it, the blue didn't show up as clear as I wanted it to, sorry >.>

Edited at April 29, 2022 09:36 AM by Malina

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