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Alright, sounds good to me. And don't worry, its just something that could make or break their friendship depending on how it goes. --Barely anything c:
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I'm in the mood to write, so I'll get a post started. Not sure if I'll complete it today, but knowing me, I probably will. Edit: I lied again. Atelia got offended becuse I felt that it was more similar to her character. And I am excited for this little "make or break" thing. >:] Also, kind of a rushed post. The ending anyways. I quite like the beginning. Edited at November 24, 2021 10:17 PM by Tenebris Umbra
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Why is Atelia kinda hilarious? The ending looked good to me, epecially when she declared Jade her favorite. Haha, anyways, my next post will be a Kenze one and more about him and his little mean ways.
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Lets play a gaamee--try and guess if that post had a bit of foreshadowing or not. Yay.
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I loved that post so much- It definitely foreshadowed a type of game. It hinted at something. I originally thought it was going to be a physically exerting game, but now my mind is in another direction. You have me super curious. All of this talk about the game and then finally mentioning Hale and their parents, not to mention sisters. I have to step it up with my trio and make them more interesting. Maybe throw in a tragedy for when Atelia returns to them <3 And Kenze! His little "evil" comments :(
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I added a snippet of backstory there. >:)
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Tell me more about this...Mara. - And nah, it won't be physically tiring, but emotionally. And thankfully, the game might be able to coax Atelias little background to ears as well. Eh, we'll see. Also, Nakoa and Naeva are interesting. I love their dynamic, as I've always wanted one where the female is a bit older and more dominant. Their both pretty similiar but ah, I can always try that out with either Jade or Kenze. We'll see. - And damn, time to delve into some more sinister aspects of the boys. --Its what I love about non-perfect characters.
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I think I'm going to be mean and leave you on a cliff hanger. - Check that off my bucket list-- but really, I'll be posting tonight or later in the afternoon. Haha.
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Ah, yes. Mara. Remember the mention of a sister? Atelia's littermate? There is a good reason as to why she's never spoke about. And I knew it! I thought it would be physical, but knowing that it wasn't made me think it might be a draining game for them to play. As for Nakoa and Naeva, I originally wanted Nakoa as an aggressive, more dominant individual, but then I switched up. It wasn't his character. It goes Naeva, Atelia, then Nakoa in terms of leadership/dominance. I still like that part where Jade moves away from the cliff when facing Kenze. It's definitely more sinister, especially with his character. I like how he's trying to justify that he isn't evil, but just isn't proving his point. And damn you for leaving me on a cliffhanger. I equally love and hate them. >.>
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All the secrets and tears finna be pouring out now. Hopefully Atelia reveals even an inkling about her littermate. You've got me curious. But then again, somethings telling me it'll just turn into the brothers cruelly battling each other over spilled milk. - And yeaa, I like that you noticed that. -Here I am planning all this crap for the future when I should just live in the moment, lmao.
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