Wolf Play : Critique?

01:52:07 Kneecap stealer

Moon

I must see these little troublemakers *^*

The A.R.T. Project

01:51:38

-WP Click-
*^* I'm anxious to see what she will spit out.

01:51:29 Kneecap stealer

The were tigers are overpowered

Moonfall

01:51:09 Many moons, one me

Ugh, the HVAC guy is coming back today to install a part, and I do not look forward to putting up the cats again. Yesterday Thumbs scratched me all along my entire arm

01:50:53 Temptations failing

Then,
I got one to defeat like 11 were-tigers and I was like no, I am NOT doing that.

01:50:48 Kneecap stealer

You could have gotten so many jasmines to sell

01:50:23 Temptations failing

Sleep,
I turned it down lmao

01:49:00 Kneecap stealer

And how'd that go wild

01:48:13 Temptations failing

Sleep,
I remember when I had a mission to kill like 5 of those lol

FireWeaver

01:46:33 DH Obsessed

Sleep,

Since a while lol

01:46:08 Kneecap stealer

Oh hey he drops me a jasmine

01:45:43 Kneecap stealer

"you spy 1 chupacabra"

ExCuSe Me?! Since when was a chupacabra in the game

Kháos

01:43:11 Kaos || Kháos

Emoji test 🙂

01:39:24 Kneecap stealer

Gotta get 400 mushielies for a viti I like :')

Lucky Rat

01:37:26 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Fudge nuggets I totally forgot to put the garbage up so my dog got into them now I have to clean it all up before my mom get home >.> the little ass

Junipero

01:26:50 Jun/Juni (he/him)

@Bonsaitreasure

I'm not sure but you could ask sales and they might know!

A bonsaitreasure

01:25:51

hi all what is a batte worlf trained to deathgrip worth ?? pm me please so i now im new but would be helpfull if persons would pay apple for them so i can have premium i will put some cp to a answer that helps me L:)

01:22:56 Temptations failing

Big Foot 1 drops Jasmine and you pick it up.

what a great way to start today :D

Owlstar

01:21:49 tiger\Owl|she\her

awwwwwwwww

01:20:44 Temptations failing

-WP Click-

Keeping this guy though, since I want to keep his mother's lines, I might just make him into a custom, he isn't the prettiest

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01:52:07 Kneecap stealer

Moon

I must see these little troublemakers *^*

The A.R.T. Project

01:51:38

-WP Click-
*^* I'm anxious to see what she will spit out.

01:51:29 Kneecap stealer

The were tigers are overpowered

Moonfall

01:51:09 Many moons, one me

Ugh, the HVAC guy is coming back today to install a part, and I do not look forward to putting up the cats again. Yesterday Thumbs scratched me all along my entire arm

01:50:53 Temptations failing

Then,
I got one to defeat like 11 were-tigers and I was like no, I am NOT doing that.

01:50:48 Kneecap stealer

You could have gotten so many jasmines to sell

01:50:23 Temptations failing

Sleep,
I turned it down lmao

01:49:00 Kneecap stealer

And how'd that go wild

01:48:13 Temptations failing

Sleep,
I remember when I had a mission to kill like 5 of those lol

FireWeaver

01:46:33 DH Obsessed

Sleep,

Since a while lol

01:46:08 Kneecap stealer

Oh hey he drops me a jasmine

01:45:43 Kneecap stealer

"you spy 1 chupacabra"

ExCuSe Me?! Since when was a chupacabra in the game

Kháos

01:43:11 Kaos || Kháos

Emoji test 🙂

01:39:24 Kneecap stealer

Gotta get 400 mushielies for a viti I like :')

Lucky Rat

01:37:26 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Fudge nuggets I totally forgot to put the garbage up so my dog got into them now I have to clean it all up before my mom get home >.> the little ass

Junipero

01:26:50 Jun/Juni (he/him)

@Bonsaitreasure

I'm not sure but you could ask sales and they might know!

A bonsaitreasure

01:25:51

01:22:56 Temptations failing

Big Foot 1 drops Jasmine and you pick it up.

what a great way to start today :D

Owlstar

01:21:49 tiger\Owl|she\her

awwwwwwwww

01:20:44 Temptations failing

-WP Click-

Keeping this guy though, since I want to keep his mother's lines, I might just make him into a custom, he isn't the prettiest

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM