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im sorry people aloways do this to me

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dawn
It's okay :D
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love story
do you need therapy

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waffles :D

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Oh I love waffles

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Chat, waffles or livermush for breakfast?

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Vax
Well, i'll still be thinking of you ^^ (That sounds so weird but don't take it like that XD)

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I FUCKING HATE MY LIFE BC THIS ALOWAYS HAPPENS

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Calm down-

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Love Story,
Uhm, you aren't allowed to swear at people like that >.>

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i think i'll be fine.

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Imma drop it for now unless they keep doing it

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Vax,
Uh oh :(

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that was my FUCKING sister

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Aww poor Cinn, Cinn can get food soon

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Oh no! I hope everything ends up okay. I'm really sorry >.<

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aw nooo D:
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10:27:03

Vents are okay yeah

10:27:02

Vax
yes

10:26:50

Cinnamon Bloom
im sorry people aloways do this to me

10:26:47 a rock in your shoe

dawn
It's okay :D
how are you?

10:26:18 a rock in your shoe

love story
do you need therapy

10:26:17 Cinn / Ace

Clex
waffles :D

10:26:11

Oh I love waffles

10:26:00 Cinn / Ace

Love
please calm down
if Love wants to vent to someone, Love can always ask chat
Some of chat does accept vents

10:25:41 Clex Rules

Chat, waffles or livermush for breakfast?

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Vax
Well, i'll still be thinking of you ^^ (That sounds so weird but don't take it like that XD)

10:24:45

I FUCKING HATE MY LIFE BC THIS ALOWAYS HAPPENS

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Calm down-

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Love Story,
Uhm, you aren't allowed to swear at people like that >.>

10:24:09 a rock in your shoe

cinn, dawn
i think i'll be fine.

10:24:07

Imma drop it for now unless they keep doing it

10:23:56 He/They pronouns

Vax,
Uh oh :(

10:23:54

Jester
that was my FUCKING sister

10:23:48 He/They pronouns

Aww poor Cinn, Cinn can get food soon

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Vax
Oh no! I hope everything ends up okay. I'm really sorry >.<

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Vax
aw nooo D:
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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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