Wolf Play : Critique?

More of how words are
said.

Sorry but it sounded like in a way you were curious if they had the dye so you could buy it. Need to becareful on how one asks a question like that

Doodle Dragon

07:10:06 He/They pronouns

Wild,
I'm slowly catching up to you in top chatters this week >:3

Wild Runners

07:10:02 Stalking chat

Rook,
I don't doubt someone has gotten a total of 500 apples but has never told anyone

Nevermore

07:09:58 Never/Nev

I've had more than 175 apples at once

Wild Runners

07:09:40 Stalking chat

Rook,
yeah probably

Sabbath

07:09:29 Rook

People have definitely had more than 175 apples at one time.

Wild Runners

07:09:01 Stalking chat

ignore the second one xD

Sabbath

07:08:54 Rook

Wild
Yeah I figured. It's probably not accurate. I have no idea how the AI would even come up with that number.

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But questioning the ai is fun

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LOL no dont worry, i feeel youu

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07:11:36 Stalking chat

Collar,
wow..
I am seriously considering myself poor at this point LOL

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07:11:24 He/They pronouns

Fei,
How are you?

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07:11:01 Stalking chat

Feiella,
oops my bad lol
didn't know that was considered sales.

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07:10:54 Pack of Sharp Snap

hey Dragon :)

Sabbath

07:10:50 Rook

Yeah let's normalize questioning what the Google AI tells us and not spreading misinformation :')

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07:10:38 He/They pronouns

Fei,
Hiya :3

Collar

07:10:21 Altar 🦌

ive had like 300 apples at a time before once lol what

Feiella

07:10:06 Pack of Sharp Snap

More of how words are
said.

Sorry but it sounded like in a way you were curious if they had the dye so you could buy it. Need to becareful on how one asks a question like that

Doodle Dragon

07:10:06 He/They pronouns

Wild,
I'm slowly catching up to you in top chatters this week >:3

Wild Runners

07:10:02 Stalking chat

Rook,
I don't doubt someone has gotten a total of 500 apples but has never told anyone

Nevermore

07:09:58 Never/Nev

I've had more than 175 apples at once

Wild Runners

07:09:40 Stalking chat

Rook,
yeah probably

Sabbath

07:09:29 Rook

People have definitely had more than 175 apples at one time.

Wild Runners

07:09:01 Stalking chat

ignore the second one xD

Sabbath

07:08:54 Rook

Wild
Yeah I figured. It's probably not accurate. I have no idea how the AI would even come up with that number.

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

Critique?

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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