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04:38:50 Boe

Khaos
Yeah life has been... lifeing I guess
I've had a lot on really and just need a break

04:38:00 Kaos || Kháos

Boeing-
For me, Jungle feels like the least profitable terrain. Tundra and Desert though... Can't figure out which of those two is better.

04:36:51 Kaos || Kháos

I think so too. I hope you're doing well!

04:36:43 Boe

Also have I just been undervaluing Tundra as an explore terrain this whole time </3
I'm getting more enemies in Tundra 7 than I did in Jungle 100

04:35:09 Pier/Shore

Heya y'all!

04:34:14 Boe

Khaos
I feel like it's definitely a bit since I've properly chatted to you lol

04:32:39 Kaos || Kháos

Hiya Boeing!

04:32:23 Boe

Hi Khaos xD

04:31:40 He/They pronouns

Khaos,
Oooo

04:31:24 Kaos || Kháos

When we leave Walmart, I'll be able to buy apples. 😆

04:30:27 He/They pronouns

Khaos,
Oo, for what? :p

04:30:09 Kaos || Kháos

One more store until Walmarttt 🥹 I'm a bit excited.

04:27:11 Cinn / Rody / Ace

"walk up my spine like a rotating staircase"

what the hell kind of author's note is that

04:27:05 He/They pronouns

Paws?

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04:26:56 Juicy Arm Boy

Doodle
Thats good ! Im well :3 doing some art right now haha. You got any fun plans or nah ?

04:26:12 Juicy Arm Boy

Poxy
Huh O.O

04:25:47 Winter

Doodle
My thinking exactly lmfao

04:25:31 He/They pronouns

Poxy,
Uhh- what is that? TvT

04:24:35

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04:23:20 He/They pronouns

Ever,
I'm good, you? :3

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04:38:50 Boe

Khaos
Yeah life has been... lifeing I guess
I've had a lot on really and just need a break

04:38:00 Kaos || Kháos

Boeing-
For me, Jungle feels like the least profitable terrain. Tundra and Desert though... Can't figure out which of those two is better.

04:36:51 Kaos || Kháos

I think so too. I hope you're doing well!

04:36:43 Boe

Also have I just been undervaluing Tundra as an explore terrain this whole time </3
I'm getting more enemies in Tundra 7 than I did in Jungle 100

04:35:09 Pier/Shore

Heya y'all!

04:34:14 Boe

Khaos
I feel like it's definitely a bit since I've properly chatted to you lol

04:32:39 Kaos || Kháos

Hiya Boeing!

04:32:23 Boe

Hi Khaos xD

04:31:40 He/They pronouns

Khaos,
Oooo

04:31:24 Kaos || Kháos

When we leave Walmart, I'll be able to buy apples. 😆

04:30:27 He/They pronouns

Khaos,
Oo, for what? :p

04:30:09 Kaos || Kháos

One more store until Walmarttt 🥹 I'm a bit excited.

04:27:11 Cinn / Rody / Ace

"walk up my spine like a rotating staircase"

what the hell kind of author's note is that

04:27:05 He/They pronouns

Paws?

-WP Click-
-WP Click-

04:26:56 Juicy Arm Boy

Doodle
Thats good ! Im well :3 doing some art right now haha. You got any fun plans or nah ?

04:26:12 Juicy Arm Boy

Poxy
Huh O.O

04:25:47 Winter

Doodle
My thinking exactly lmfao

04:25:31 He/They pronouns

Poxy,
Uhh- what is that? TvT

04:24:35

<a -WP Click-
<img class='img-fluid' -WP Click-

04:23:20 He/They pronouns

Ever,
I'm good, you? :3

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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