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Lurking shadows

10:42:32

Have u read wc?

Lurking shadows

10:42:12

I js looked at ur fandoms half of ur fandoms im also in RIP

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10:39:31

Ahhh

10:36:18 Cinn / Ace

i made a really bad caine and my friend made bubble
i titled it "doki doki digital circus"

10:24:35 Cinn / Ace

suddenly remembering that time i accidentlly bought a make male figurine instead of female so it's just
in my relic hole

Lurking shadows

10:18:01

Ofc np :D

10:17:06 ezra, he/him

lurking-
oh thanks! :)

Lurking shadows

10:16:54

death :/

Lurking shadows

10:16:35

And Heidrich ahhh

10:16:32 Cinn / Ace

it was terrifying to log in today to 16 notifs lmao
it was a bunch of raffles, one death, and one pop

Lurking shadows

10:16:11

Ezrian Lucera is hella pretty

10:14:33 ezra, he/him

🫠

Lurking shadows

10:13:45

ahhh shi theres a chemistry exam tmrw ToT

Lurking shadows

10:12:31

Oh and tysm for the tips

Lurking shadows

10:12:15

Ahhh okie but yeahh, like Muddy'paws falls in most of the time althought his cp are maxed out

10:11:28 Acorn (She/Her)

Lurking
Is it the wolf with it maxed falling in?
Also CP doesn't guarantee they won't. it just increases the chance they won't

Lurking shadows

10:11:11

my wolf is soon gunna pop prolly when im asleep tho ToT

Lurking shadows

10:09:50

I have ones with it maxed out and they still decide to fall in :/

Lurking shadows

10:09:20

probbably bih mah writting today is horrible

10:09:02 Acorn (She/Her)

Lurking
That's why adding wisdom CP to your wolf makes them avoid it :D
And/or perception

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Lurking shadows

10:42:32

Have u read wc?

Lurking shadows

10:42:12

I js looked at ur fandoms half of ur fandoms im also in RIP

Lurking shadows

10:39:31

Ahhh

10:36:18 Cinn / Ace

i made a really bad caine and my friend made bubble
i titled it "doki doki digital circus"

10:24:35 Cinn / Ace

suddenly remembering that time i accidentlly bought a make male figurine instead of female so it's just
in my relic hole

Lurking shadows

10:18:01

Ofc np :D

10:17:06 ezra, he/him

lurking-
oh thanks! :)

Lurking shadows

10:16:54

death :/

Lurking shadows

10:16:35

And Heidrich ahhh

10:16:32 Cinn / Ace

it was terrifying to log in today to 16 notifs lmao
it was a bunch of raffles, one death, and one pop

Lurking shadows

10:16:11

Ezrian Lucera is hella pretty

10:14:33 ezra, he/him

🫠

Lurking shadows

10:13:45

ahhh shi theres a chemistry exam tmrw ToT

Lurking shadows

10:12:31

Oh and tysm for the tips

Lurking shadows

10:12:15

Ahhh okie but yeahh, like Muddy'paws falls in most of the time althought his cp are maxed out

10:11:28 Acorn (She/Her)

Lurking
Is it the wolf with it maxed falling in?
Also CP doesn't guarantee they won't. it just increases the chance they won't

Lurking shadows

10:11:11

my wolf is soon gunna pop prolly when im asleep tho ToT

Lurking shadows

10:09:50

I have ones with it maxed out and they still decide to fall in :/

Lurking shadows

10:09:20

probbably bih mah writting today is horrible

10:09:02 Acorn (She/Her)

Lurking
That's why adding wisdom CP to your wolf makes them avoid it :D
And/or perception

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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