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08:42:09 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
haha (not my fault)

08:40:30 Cinn / Ace

DD
i'm working on the pose with your arm out and there's sO MaNy crUNCHY spots

08:39:43 Cinn / Ace

Dark
i don't know if i can show it and i can't ask any main mods :P
i'm gonna play it safe even though DD has a mask on in it

08:39:04 Dawn

DD
>.<

08:38:27 He/They pronouns

Hmm, does this look good? I really hate this project ToT

-Click-

08:37:46 He/They pronouns

I don't even know what's happening

08:37:36 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
O-oh, I don't like it either

Master Darkfire

08:37:17 Dark/fire/ice

what is it cinn?

08:33:42 Sirens Alluring

-WP Click-
Paws?? :3

08:32:25 Cinn / Ace

DD
I don't like this picture
it's pissing me off

08:27:26 Chat, Noir, Venti

$ +12|236T emits a threatening snarl. Who pissed you off, Nox?

08:27:14 Cinn / Ace

-WP Click-
she's cooking
she better give me a katsuki worthy pup

08:26:34 He/They pronouns

Oh, yeah talent, sorry ToT

08:26:00 Cinn / Ace

DD
you mean talent?
he does look more like his dad
(and he's prettier)

08:25:12 He/They pronouns

Do the 76 rarity one :p

Master Darkfire

08:24:36 Dark/fire/ice

hi chat :3

08:23:39 Cinn / Ace

I wanna keep one of the Zhanshi kids but
-WP Click-
-WP Click-
which one?
(i'm thinking the 10 hero but she has less talent :P)

08:22:14 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
Lol

08:19:29 Cinn / Ace

DD
it worked
i now have two kids that look like zhanshi

08:18:07

I understand, I had said it before I saw your answer before. I didn't mean to make you repeat.

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08:42:09 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
haha (not my fault)

08:40:30 Cinn / Ace

DD
i'm working on the pose with your arm out and there's sO MaNy crUNCHY spots

08:39:43 Cinn / Ace

Dark
i don't know if i can show it and i can't ask any main mods :P
i'm gonna play it safe even though DD has a mask on in it

08:39:04 Dawn

DD
>.<

08:38:27 He/They pronouns

Hmm, does this look good? I really hate this project ToT

-Click-

08:37:46 He/They pronouns

I don't even know what's happening

08:37:36 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
O-oh, I don't like it either

Master Darkfire

08:37:17 Dark/fire/ice

what is it cinn?

08:33:42 Sirens Alluring

-WP Click-
Paws?? :3

08:32:25 Cinn / Ace

DD
I don't like this picture
it's pissing me off

08:27:26 Chat, Noir, Venti

$ +12|236T emits a threatening snarl. Who pissed you off, Nox?

08:27:14 Cinn / Ace

-WP Click-
she's cooking
she better give me a katsuki worthy pup

08:26:34 He/They pronouns

Oh, yeah talent, sorry ToT

08:26:00 Cinn / Ace

DD
you mean talent?
he does look more like his dad
(and he's prettier)

08:25:12 He/They pronouns

Do the 76 rarity one :p

Master Darkfire

08:24:36 Dark/fire/ice

hi chat :3

08:23:39 Cinn / Ace

I wanna keep one of the Zhanshi kids but
-WP Click-
-WP Click-
which one?
(i'm thinking the 10 hero but she has less talent :P)

08:22:14 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
Lol

08:19:29 Cinn / Ace

DD
it worked
i now have two kids that look like zhanshi

08:18:07

I understand, I had said it before I saw your answer before. I didn't mean to make you repeat.

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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