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08:01:55 tern | they/he

nrc
the one you already posted in chat? i was just about to compliment the hand its so good /silly

08:01:26 NRC/Night/Raven

My*

08:01:20 NRC/Night/Raven

Tern
Wanna see me new art?

08:00:45 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Ace, let's just say Ladybug and Cat Noir are ex partners and are now enemies

Spinel, ummm what

08:00:08 tern | they/he

hey chat this is important if yall live in ohio you should contact your senators and tell them not to pass house bill 249, which classifies drag as 'adult entertainment' and therefore bans it from any spaces where children may be present (which is most public spaces)
in addition, the wording of the bill is purposefully vague so it can be used to attack trans people, and could even be used against cis people
lets not let that happen <3

07:57:35

Holly
Iconic shit. You haven't lived until you've roleplayed a gory kids' novel.

07:57:27 Cinn / Rody / Ace

holly
having miraculous canon is already a crackfic honestly

07:57:11 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Spinel........I did that, that's how my girl Shystar was created

07:56:38 NRC/Night/Raven

Not outlined or colored

07:56:37 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Ace, I mean maybe, we've incorporated a lot of canon stuff but what's happening and what is planned is not

07:56:24 Cinn / Rody / Ace

-WP Click-
holy shit i forgot he was so pretty

07:56:07 NRC/Night/Raven

-Click-
This took me one day to do, one of my longer ones but I like it.

07:55:53

Or, I guess, roleplay Miraculous.

07:55:35

You're not insane until you and your friends create warrior cats clans and roleplay at recess every day. Man, those were the days.

ChatNoir

07:55:15 Chat, Noir, Venti

Along with me identifying as a werewolf, I might be also identifying as a dragon? Or a Pallas cat as well?

07:54:53 Cinn / Rody / Ace

holly
it sounds like you're bordering a crackfic

07:54:19 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Ace, it is very intense and chapter three is still being written

Black Dawn Den

07:54:10 Dawn

Spinel
That sounds like torture haha

07:52:56 Cinn / Rody / Ace

holly
i already fear for you lmao

07:51:36 Shy, Jess (She/her)

people should be concerned about the sanity levels of my friend and I, purely because of a Miraculous Ladybug AU we are collabing on

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08:01:55 tern | they/he

nrc
the one you already posted in chat? i was just about to compliment the hand its so good /silly

08:01:26 NRC/Night/Raven

My*

08:01:20 NRC/Night/Raven

Tern
Wanna see me new art?

08:00:45 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Ace, let's just say Ladybug and Cat Noir are ex partners and are now enemies

Spinel, ummm what

08:00:08 tern | they/he

07:57:35

Holly
Iconic shit. You haven't lived until you've roleplayed a gory kids' novel.

07:57:27 Cinn / Rody / Ace

holly
having miraculous canon is already a crackfic honestly

07:57:11 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Spinel........I did that, that's how my girl Shystar was created

07:56:38 NRC/Night/Raven

Not outlined or colored

07:56:37 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Ace, I mean maybe, we've incorporated a lot of canon stuff but what's happening and what is planned is not

07:56:24 Cinn / Rody / Ace

-WP Click-
holy shit i forgot he was so pretty

07:56:07 NRC/Night/Raven

-Click-
This took me one day to do, one of my longer ones but I like it.

07:55:53

Or, I guess, roleplay Miraculous.

07:55:35

You're not insane until you and your friends create warrior cats clans and roleplay at recess every day. Man, those were the days.

ChatNoir

07:55:15 Chat, Noir, Venti

Along with me identifying as a werewolf, I might be also identifying as a dragon? Or a Pallas cat as well?

07:54:53 Cinn / Rody / Ace

holly
it sounds like you're bordering a crackfic

07:54:19 Shy, Jess (She/her)

Ace, it is very intense and chapter three is still being written

Black Dawn Den

07:54:10 Dawn

Spinel
That sounds like torture haha

07:52:56 Cinn / Rody / Ace

holly
i already fear for you lmao

07:51:36 Shy, Jess (She/her)

people should be concerned about the sanity levels of my friend and I, purely because of a Miraculous Ladybug AU we are collabing on

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February 25, 2022 03:43 PM

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hit me with your worst. i'm going to do another painfully long YCH to make some mush/apples - which i will probably spend on something unimportant later on.

but besides my rambling, i need some helpful critics to judge this sketch before i go over with more clean lines.

critic away ;]

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Edited at February 26, 2022 04:42 PM by Sollicitus <3

February 25, 2022 03:43 PM

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you might need to zoom in a little, sorry. it's a bit big 🙈

February 25, 2022 03:51 PM

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Looks real good!

Maybe point his snout up a bit? And make his eye a bit higher?

Edited at February 25, 2022 03:51 PM by Wolfborn

February 26, 2022 02:28 PM

Sir Froggington

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The back to hind legs should be flatter. Kinda a straight line

February 26, 2022 04:01 PM

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updated version:

Edited at February 26, 2022 04:38 PM by Sollicitus <3

February 26, 2022 04:45 PM

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the only issue im seeing is the back legs look like they're floating in the air they look really stiff but other then that it looks good

Edited at February 26, 2022 04:54 PM by Hermes

February 26, 2022 06:10 PM

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February 26, 2022 06:52 PM

Sir Froggington

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Could I try to redline?

February 27, 2022 04:53 PM

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of course ^^

Sir Froggington said:

Could I try to redline?