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 Moonfall
07:01:20 Many moons, one me
Wanna make sure all cats are ok before you leave the house? Shake shake "mrrp?"
 Doodle Dragon
07:01:17 He/They pronouns
Ever,
Lol
 EvergreenHills
07:00:19 Juicy Arm Boy
Doodle
You have given me trauma to the point where im hovering my mouse over the link just to check that it isn't a forum topic
 Moonfall
07:00:16 Many moons, one me
Chat, same, we call it the css or kss
 ChatNoir
06:58:49 Chat, Noir, Venti
I can summon one or all three with the cat treat box.
 Doodle Dragon
06:58:48 He/They pronouns
I'm gonna chase her if she doesn't go into labor soon ToT (I know I have like 3-ish hours until then :p)

-WP Click-
 Moonfall
06:58:41 Many moons, one me
We need some sort of appointed link clicker to avoid that page
 ChatNoir
06:57:27 Chat, Noir, Venti
My cats really like being given cat treats.
 CB's Sanctuary
06:56:56 Cinn / Rody / Ace
DD
certified luna now, congrats
 Doodle Dragon
06:56:39 He/They pronouns
Ever,
Thank you ^^
 Doodle Dragon
06:56:28 He/They pronouns
Moonfall,
Lol X3
 EvergreenHills
06:56:20 Juicy Arm Boy
Doodle
Pretty wolf :3
 CB's Sanctuary
06:56:17 Cinn / Rody / Ace
dont worry everyone, that's actually a wolf
 Moonfall
06:56:08 Many moons, one me
Doodle, I just imagined you as my cat tricking me into sharing my food for the third time today only to sniff it and walk away
 Doodle Dragon
06:55:53 He/They pronouns
Paws?

-WP Click-
 Doodle Dragon
06:55:42 He/They pronouns
Ever,
^^
 EvergreenHills
06:55:11 Juicy Arm Boy
You know, from what happened earlier this week you'd think id be smart enough to NOT click on links that were posted in chat by Doodle
 CB's Sanctuary
06:55:00 Cinn / Rody / Ace
this cat is trying to bite my ears and turn my arms into flesh strips
help
 Doodle Dragon
06:54:36 He/They pronouns
Moonfall,
:3
 Moonfall
06:54:26 Many moons, one me
Dang it doodle

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 Moonfall
07:01:20 Many moons, one me
Wanna make sure all cats are ok before you leave the house? Shake shake "mrrp?"
 Doodle Dragon
07:01:17 He/They pronouns
Ever,
Lol
 EvergreenHills
07:00:19 Juicy Arm Boy
Doodle
You have given me trauma to the point where im hovering my mouse over the link just to check that it isn't a forum topic
 Moonfall
07:00:16 Many moons, one me
Chat, same, we call it the css or kss
 ChatNoir
06:58:49 Chat, Noir, Venti
I can summon one or all three with the cat treat box.
 Doodle Dragon
06:58:48 He/They pronouns
I'm gonna chase her if she doesn't go into labor soon ToT (I know I have like 3-ish hours until then :p)

-WP Click-
 Moonfall
06:58:41 Many moons, one me
We need some sort of appointed link clicker to avoid that page
 ChatNoir
06:57:27 Chat, Noir, Venti
My cats really like being given cat treats.
 CB's Sanctuary
06:56:56 Cinn / Rody / Ace
DD
certified luna now, congrats
 Doodle Dragon
06:56:39 He/They pronouns
Ever,
Thank you ^^
 Doodle Dragon
06:56:28 He/They pronouns
Moonfall,
Lol X3
 EvergreenHills
06:56:20 Juicy Arm Boy
Doodle
Pretty wolf :3
 CB's Sanctuary
06:56:17 Cinn / Rody / Ace
dont worry everyone, that's actually a wolf
 Moonfall
06:56:08 Many moons, one me
Doodle, I just imagined you as my cat tricking me into sharing my food for the third time today only to sniff it and walk away
 Doodle Dragon
06:55:53 He/They pronouns
Paws?

-WP Click-
 Doodle Dragon
06:55:42 He/They pronouns
Ever,
^^
 EvergreenHills
06:55:11 Juicy Arm Boy
You know, from what happened earlier this week you'd think id be smart enough to NOT click on links that were posted in chat by Doodle
 CB's Sanctuary
06:55:00 Cinn / Rody / Ace
this cat is trying to bite my ears and turn my arms into flesh strips
help
 Doodle Dragon
06:54:36 He/They pronouns
Moonfall,
:3
 Moonfall
06:54:26 Many moons, one me
Dang it doodle




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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