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10:12:04 Eas

I dont really ever see them on anymore myself, but im hardly on as well nowadays. I scored a few wolves from them a few game years back but nothing since

10:10:30 Medicinally Autistic

I think last time we talked we were both going through a lot.

10:10:15 Medicinally Autistic

I haven't seen them around in forever and I hope they are doing well ^-^

10:09:21 Eas

Votexy bred wolves :)

10:06:59 Medicinally Autistic

Vox wolves?

10:06:00 Eas

I want more Vox wolves

10:03:19 Medicinally Autistic

Okay I'm gonna be lurking while I explore :3 good luck all :3

10:02:54 Medicinally Autistic

Geodes are so expensive for no reason lol

Finalized

10:02:19 Fin/Finny/Fina

dude- 2285 steps left of exploration. do they add up even if you're not active over time? omg.

10:02:17 Medicinally Autistic

Yes, gonna get back into explore too, but my wolves are killing me right now ;-;

Boeing

10:01:49 Boe

Hi Apothecary ^^
New flag :o

10:00:13 Medicinally Autistic

I need to get back into all my friends alliances.

KittyE

09:57:51

9:57pm im at work ugh

09:56:35 Eas

My time is the same time as game time

Spinel Grotto

09:56:13

10:55. Almost bedtime :)

09:56:04 toe licker

ah! never mind don't answer that i gotta go. bye everyone!

09:54:20 toe licker

its 7:54 pm for me

09:54:08 toe licker

what time is it for you guys? just curious

09:53:39 toe licker

*frickin not fiction

09:53:31 toe licker

Eas
thanks as well! i was so friction confused lmao!

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10:12:04 Eas

I dont really ever see them on anymore myself, but im hardly on as well nowadays. I scored a few wolves from them a few game years back but nothing since

10:10:30 Medicinally Autistic

I think last time we talked we were both going through a lot.

10:10:15 Medicinally Autistic

I haven't seen them around in forever and I hope they are doing well ^-^

10:09:21 Eas

Votexy bred wolves :)

10:06:59 Medicinally Autistic

Vox wolves?

10:06:00 Eas

I want more Vox wolves

10:03:19 Medicinally Autistic

Okay I'm gonna be lurking while I explore :3 good luck all :3

10:02:54 Medicinally Autistic

Geodes are so expensive for no reason lol

Finalized

10:02:19 Fin/Finny/Fina

dude- 2285 steps left of exploration. do they add up even if you're not active over time? omg.

10:02:17 Medicinally Autistic

Yes, gonna get back into explore too, but my wolves are killing me right now ;-;

Boeing

10:01:49 Boe

Hi Apothecary ^^
New flag :o

10:00:13 Medicinally Autistic

I need to get back into all my friends alliances.

KittyE

09:57:51

9:57pm im at work ugh

09:56:35 Eas

My time is the same time as game time

Spinel Grotto

09:56:13

10:55. Almost bedtime :)

09:56:04 toe licker

ah! never mind don't answer that i gotta go. bye everyone!

09:54:20 toe licker

its 7:54 pm for me

09:54:08 toe licker

what time is it for you guys? just curious

09:53:39 toe licker

*frickin not fiction

09:53:31 toe licker

Eas
thanks as well! i was so friction confused lmao!

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM