Wolf Play : Critique?

It was a player that was quite rich and was leaving so they gave away all that and auctioned their wolves which were quite some good battle wolves and breeders, as well as customs, it was before I left for a bit so now I have all these dyes and no apples to make customs so... it's a museum collection at this point

Serpents

04:40:08 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

if anyone knows any good names that mean fox or foxish stuff pm me please

Serpents

04:39:40 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

im off to get a snack

Winterfell

04:38:35 Winter

Saint
Whattt that's so cool

Saint

04:37:53 Is a bee

That's great, it's been so long that I can't remember if I've ever gotten anything, I do know I won a winners take all raffle with like 10 dyes once

Winterfell

04:36:03 Winter

Saint
People literally give me their geodes to crack xD

Saint

04:34:53 Is a bee

Woah :o I need to just have you open my geodes lma

Winterfell

04:34:24 Winter

Saint
She's given me Every crystalline dye and double

Winterfell

04:34:07 Winter

Saint
3 lmao me and bree have a very good relationship xD

Saint

04:33:42 Is a bee

Oh emerald is so pretty! Congrats! How many geodes did it take for all that?

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Master Darkfire

04:59:07 Dark/fire/ice

ok! ^^

Moonfall

04:58:54 Many moons, one me

Ok I'm exploring, Xena scared off the cubs in jungle and I got a complete Chinese Pottery

Master Darkfire

04:58:16 Dark/fire/ice

no idea. kinda wanna team up with someone and then we can split the rewards from the geodes...I might propose that in sales chat...good idea me...

Wild Runners

04:56:51 Stalking chat

should I buy a apple?

Master Darkfire

04:55:40 Dark/fire/ice

wild I almost have 10 geodes LMAO aaaand still no apples :(

Master Darkfire

04:55:08 Dark/fire/ice

I have exactly 80 ^^

Wild Runners

04:54:47 Stalking chat

man I wish I had some geodes and apples to crack some geodes xD

Moonfall

04:51:25 Many moons, one me

Oh wow I have almost 60 paws, I just noticed that

Master Darkfire

04:48:10 Dark/fire/ice

byeeeeeee saint

Saint

04:46:50 Is a bee

My break ended so fast :( bye

Saint

04:42:09 Is a bee

Serpents

04:40:08 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

if anyone knows any good names that mean fox or foxish stuff pm me please

Serpents

04:39:40 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

im off to get a snack

Winterfell

04:38:35 Winter

Saint
Whattt that's so cool

Saint

04:37:53 Is a bee

That's great, it's been so long that I can't remember if I've ever gotten anything, I do know I won a winners take all raffle with like 10 dyes once

Winterfell

04:36:03 Winter

Saint
People literally give me their geodes to crack xD

Saint

04:34:53 Is a bee

Woah :o I need to just have you open my geodes lma

Winterfell

04:34:24 Winter

Saint
She's given me Every crystalline dye and double

Winterfell

04:34:07 Winter

Saint
3 lmao me and bree have a very good relationship xD

Saint

04:33:42 Is a bee

Oh emerald is so pretty! Congrats! How many geodes did it take for all that?

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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