Wolf Play : Galaxy Help

11:27:41 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Pera
I’m into any animal! I’m an animal person so I love them all from the biggest wale to the smallest mouse love them all^x^

11:21:47 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

what sounds cool for an oc design (eye/left side of face ) smoke leaking from the eye either wide opened or slit smoke/other ghostly thing falling from the eye, pupil looks like a ghost, no scalera, other(pm me) for face glowing marks, bits are translucent ill take ideas just pm me ,

11:21:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

I need to name wolves and stuff...

The Aura's

11:20:57 Aura/Pea

I'm so tired 😑

11:17:42 Kneecap stealer

1836/3800

11:16:26 Pera

@Rat
Ooh! Are you into horses?

11:14:22 Kneecap stealer

1826/3800

Andypaws

11:14:16 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Currently 23:14 for me

Flightless Nesters

11:07:01

Hello Night owls 🦉

11:04:58 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Pera
I got some old fashion books based on how to draw 50 different horse styles

10:48:46 Pera

@Rat
Thank you, lol, I can drop a tutorial in forums probably?

10:38:57 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Pera
It still looks good! Every time I try to draw a horse it just looks like a fat dog with skinny legs XD

10:34:33 Pera

@Ezra
Thank you! I have studied my own Arabian for a little bit, sadly she doesn’t have as much hair, or gusto XD

10:33:11 ezra, he/him

pera-
ooh nice! i'm not a horse expert but it looks very accurate too :)

10:32:02 Pera

Arabian
-Click-

10:18:57 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a rp pm me

10:17:05 ezra, he/him

yesssss my explorers are starting to get to dg

10:10:38 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok rattie is off for a bit, be back soon <3

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11:27:41 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Pera
I’m into any animal! I’m an animal person so I love them all from the biggest wale to the smallest mouse love them all^x^

11:21:47 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

11:21:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

I need to name wolves and stuff...

The Aura's

11:20:57 Aura/Pea

I'm so tired 😑

11:17:42 Kneecap stealer

1836/3800

11:16:26 Pera

@Rat
Ooh! Are you into horses?

11:14:22 Kneecap stealer

1826/3800

Andypaws

11:14:16 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Currently 23:14 for me

Flightless Nesters

11:07:01

Hello Night owls 🦉

11:04:58 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Pera
I got some old fashion books based on how to draw 50 different horse styles

10:48:46 Pera

@Rat
Thank you, lol, I can drop a tutorial in forums probably?

10:38:57 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Pera
It still looks good! Every time I try to draw a horse it just looks like a fat dog with skinny legs XD

10:34:33 Pera

@Ezra
Thank you! I have studied my own Arabian for a little bit, sadly she doesn’t have as much hair, or gusto XD

10:33:11 ezra, he/him

pera-
ooh nice! i'm not a horse expert but it looks very accurate too :)

10:32:02 Pera

Arabian
-Click-

10:18:57 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a rp pm me

10:17:05 ezra, he/him

yesssss my explorers are starting to get to dg

10:10:38 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok rattie is off for a bit, be back soon <3

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again