Wolf Play : Critique?

07:11:21 Dawn

Deimos
The ones I own are Eddy and JD (Johnny Depp lol)

07:10:56 NRC/Night/Raven

Than we have a cow Who s name is Piper, then our doggy is Nala and my bunny is Nutmeg(:

07:10:47 tern | they/he

im being forced to write backstory and im just bullshitting it but im really liking this retrofuturism tech vs magic war ive got going on i might have to expand on it later

07:10:27 Dawn

OMG I've been trying so hard to get top ten for anything in the full moon tournament but I'm not good enough >.<

07:10:20 tiger\Owl|she\her

Yep now I’m hungry

07:10:08 NRC/Night/Raven

Owl
Lol cream puff

07:10:02

The goats I have names are as followed

Boys: buckaroo, king Louie, prince, Randy
, chestnut
Girls: pink, silver, Jill, spice, ginger, diamond girl, star, Luna, Dorian, glory, Rosie, rio

07:09:41 tiger\Owl|she\her

NRC when I was reading the names my brain said:cream puff -Click-

07:09:06 NRC/Night/Raven

Dawn
Aww that was sweet.

07:08:48 Stalking chat

Now time for the dog ooohh lalaa

07:08:32 Dawn

NRC
Haha I love it! The person I work for (i'm a hire farmhand) named her goat after me once I delivered her haha

07:08:29 Stalking chat

Eye ball,
Thank you! ^^

07:08:17

Dawn

Buckaroo is a LaMancha

07:07:40 NRC/Night/Raven

And I somehow remember them all..

07:07:18 NRC/Night/Raven

Our sheeps names are:
Pearl
Frostie
Galax
Sweety
Cottonball
Cream Puff
Harmony
Blossom
(:

07:07:16 tern | they/he

wild
oooh i love the colours on the snakes :0

07:06:50 Stalking chat

-Click-

ahh how we think so far?

07:06:40 Dawn

Good night Hunter!!

07:06:24 Dawn

Deimos
That's so crazy! He looks like mine. Mines a Sonnet and is white. His name is Eddie XD

07:05:42 NRC/Night/Raven

Aww cute name

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07:11:21 Dawn

Deimos
The ones I own are Eddy and JD (Johnny Depp lol)

07:10:56 NRC/Night/Raven

Than we have a cow Who s name is Piper, then our doggy is Nala and my bunny is Nutmeg(:

07:10:47 tern | they/he

im being forced to write backstory and im just bullshitting it but im really liking this retrofuturism tech vs magic war ive got going on i might have to expand on it later

07:10:27 Dawn

OMG I've been trying so hard to get top ten for anything in the full moon tournament but I'm not good enough >.<

07:10:20 tiger\Owl|she\her

Yep now I’m hungry

07:10:08 NRC/Night/Raven

Owl
Lol cream puff

07:10:02

The goats I have names are as followed

Boys: buckaroo, king Louie, prince, Randy
, chestnut
Girls: pink, silver, Jill, spice, ginger, diamond girl, star, Luna, Dorian, glory, Rosie, rio

07:09:41 tiger\Owl|she\her

NRC when I was reading the names my brain said:cream puff -Click-

07:09:06 NRC/Night/Raven

Dawn
Aww that was sweet.

07:08:48 Stalking chat

Now time for the dog ooohh lalaa

07:08:32 Dawn

NRC
Haha I love it! The person I work for (i'm a hire farmhand) named her goat after me once I delivered her haha

07:08:29 Stalking chat

Eye ball,
Thank you! ^^

07:08:17

Dawn

Buckaroo is a LaMancha

07:07:40 NRC/Night/Raven

And I somehow remember them all..

07:07:18 NRC/Night/Raven

Our sheeps names are:
Pearl
Frostie
Galax
Sweety
Cottonball
Cream Puff
Harmony
Blossom
(:

07:07:16 tern | they/he

wild
oooh i love the colours on the snakes :0

07:06:50 Stalking chat

-Click-

ahh how we think so far?

07:06:40 Dawn

Good night Hunter!!

07:06:24 Dawn

Deimos
That's so crazy! He looks like mine. Mines a Sonnet and is white. His name is Eddie XD

07:05:42 NRC/Night/Raven

Aww cute name

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM