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 Urux
04:47:02 Urox, Uris
Hades
Haha, fair enough. I normally sleep ~8 hours. But I get up at 6am. In reality I sleep more like 6 hours haha. ET is right though, that should be a reasonable time to sleep lol. I think you're just used to less sleep.

Exactly! It's just a new one with Edling. Here's a link, easier to just show you lol.
-WP Click-

I have noticed that you weren't as active. Last I saw you properly, I think I was in the midst of exams still. I get those results on the 29th, hopefully all goes well and I passed everything. I'm still very anxious about it though :')
Not long now till my partner comes to visit and then I'm off to the UK. Imagine I passed ET in the streets haha --jk I'm actually no where near London lol. May go up to visit family
 Hades
04:44:06 
Urux, my sleep schedule is so chopped. <|3 I was talking to Eternity and got super sleepy and I was like, "if I go to sleep now, I'll wake up at 3 AM." and he was like, "Nooo, 9 PM is a plenty reasonable time to sleep. c:" and here we are. e.e lmaoo

But isn't that a mood? I sit down to write a liiiittle short post and it ends up being 3 pages long. And you get so impatient for the reply, lol. What's your RP about? You must like it a lot to write so much.

As for me (thanks for asking, by the way), I've been alright. Got busy with life and unintentionally took a step back from WP for a few weeks but I'm back. ^^ You?
 Urux
04:40:17 Urox, Uris
Hades
How you're not tired I have no idea haha. I'm going to sleep in a little bit, I'm just doing my rp starters haha. They're a lot more detailed than I meant them to be lol

How have you been though?
 Hades
04:36:34 
The Walking Dead, well, congrats - whether your kids are pixelated, furred, or ... skinned. :P
 Hades
04:34:52 
I think it's even worse that I've already slept for the night and I'm up at this time, lol.
 Urux
04:32:06 Urox, Uris
Hades
Why are you awake! Go sleep haha
 The Walking Dead
04:30:16 Walker, Rogue
Naw your fine! Was entertaining from both points of view XD
 Hades
04:28:34 
The Walking Dead, no worries. Just a bit of an idiot and I did a speed read. xD
 Hades
04:28:13 
Urux, it's 3 AM, what do you think? Be nice to me. :(
 The Walking Dead
04:12:32 Walker, Rogue
Lmao! No I did re-read and think hold up I should of specified! 😂
Thank you though! <3
 Urux
04:11:20 Urox, Uris
Hades
Are you fully awake yet? xD
 Hades
04:10:37 
I thought you were talking about actual in real life twins and I was like, "How did you not know? 😳" lmaoo. Congrats. <3
 The Walking Dead
04:06:58 Walker, Rogue
Just had twins?!?
I didn't even know that was a thing!
 Amygdala
04:01:40 Amy/Anpmygdala
P'sky
See ya, i'll be logging off for a bit too

Bye chat
 MLadySkylar
04:01:01 P'Sky
Amy
Goodnight ^°^
See you later today
 Amygdala
03:59:40 Amy/Anpmygdala
P'sky
Sleep time for you then XD
Goodnight
 MLadySkylar
03:57:57 P'Sky
Amy
I'm very much sleepy
 Amygdala
03:56:56 Amy/Anpmygdala
P'sky
Yay XD
And then go sleep, rest us important
 MLadySkylar
03:54:52 P'Sky
I should go back to bed
Amy I'll pvp really quick
 Amygdala
03:52:23 Amy/Anpmygdala
Anyone wants to pvp me before i go to work

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I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:34 PM


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Getting straight into it. I have this little scholarship essay, a looming due date, and nobody to look over it for me. Help?

Prompt: What are your education and Career Goals? How do you plan on impacting your community in the future?

Essay: Min- 250. Max-500. Current- 261

Revised: 258 words.

My name is []. I'm a senior at [] High School, and my goal, once I graduate, is to pursue an Associate Degree in Baking and Pastry Arts and a Bachelor's in Food and Beverage Management at [] & [] University. This will prepare me for owning my own business in the future. What made me desire a career in this field? My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment. I then knew that, unlike other hobbies I had tried, this was what I truly enjoyed and wished to spend time furthering my knowledge of. When I first had the thought of owning my own business, I didn't think of doing much with it. Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate. My wish is to create a community filled with acceptance and warmth by using any business I create. What I wish to do is hire certain nonviolent criminals and those who are beginning to age out of the foster care system, therefore giving a second chance to those who need it. This scholarship would allow me to gain the skills necessary to not only survive but thrive in my chosen field, as well as use my experience to help others thrive.


Edited at December 31, 2022 08:21 PM by Flower Field
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:43 PM


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It's good, but I feel like there are still some things you could improve
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:46 PM


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Heyo, I would replace a bit of your wording;
"while also" -> "in addition to",
"Before too long, however," -> "Not too long after".
Apologies if this was vague or didn't make sense, I'm a little tired hehe. There's a whole list somewhere, but I forgot what it's called.
However if your school has a career center or similar, I do recommend going there or asking a trusted teacher!
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:54 PM


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It does help! Also, I wish I could ask a teacher to look it over but the due date is before winter break is over so most of my teachers aren't checking their email.

Wilted said:
Heyo, I would replace a bit of your wording;
"while also" -> "in addition to",
"Before too long, however," -> "Not too long after".
Apologies if this was vague or didn't make sense, I'm a little tired hehe. There's a whole list somewhere, but I forgot what it's called.
However if your school has a career center or similar, I do recommend going there or asking a trusted teacher!


I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 07:08 PM


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Edited at December 31, 2022 07:53 PM by Flower Field
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 07:20 PM


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Hmm, have you tried reading this out loud? There's a lot of commas/pauses. I wouldn't exactly try to compress everything into one sentence, as that can be a mouthful (brainful? I'm still tired).
Try splitting them up a bit?
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:30 PM


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Try to change "What made me desire a career in this field? My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made" to:
My passion for baking made me desire a career in this field, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made.
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:33 PM


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Be sure to add a period between 'made' and 'the'
My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment.
Should be
My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made. The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment.
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:34 PM


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I'm just pointing out minor things that need to be fixed for now
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:35 PM


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Wow, kinda embarrassed I didn't notice I forgot a period lol
Also, I appreciate any and all help!

Edited at December 31, 2022 08:36 PM by Flower Field

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